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Mein Chali – میں چلی جاؤں گی

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Mein chali jaon gi yaadon ko muqaf’fal ker ke

Us ki bakhshi hui saanson ko mukam’mal ker ke


Khud hi jab bhool ke aati hon mein apni chatri

Kyon wo mil jati hai wapas mujhey jal’thal ker ke


Kachi deewaron pe rakh leti hon dukh sukh ke charaagh

Aankh se oonchi Imaraat ko oojhal ker ke


Ab sanwaron gi bhala kaise sarapa apna

Zaat ko apni tau rakh daala hai jungle ker ke


Baad muddat jo khushi aayi thi pal bhar ke liye

Oorh leti hon usi lamhey ko aanchal ker ke


Ye judai ke andheron mein damakti hui raat

Chandni choray gi Ik din mujhay pagal ker ke


Ta’ana’zan hain wo meri fikr ki beenai par

Jin ko Naina ne saja rakha hai kajal ker ke

 

Sagar Sahil Sehra Ab sanwaaroon gi bhala kaisay saraapa apna
Zaat ko apni to rakh daala hai jungle kar ke
Wah – Zabardast ghazal!

04 June 2009 at 23:59

Syed Kami Shah wah zabardast….kya kehny naina….tumhari ghazal k dosry sher sy mujhy shafiq -ur-rehman ka novelet “ barsati“ yad aagaya….jis may kahani k hero k her baar apni barsati wapis mil jati hai…
allah pak aap ko shad aabad rakhy.

05 June 2009 at 00:05

Razia Ahmed V. nice….

05 June 2009 at 00:29

Nasreen Syed Kachi deewaron pe rakh leti hon dukh sukh ke charaagh
Aankh se oonchi Imaaraat ko oojhal ker ke

Wah Farzana…Ajkal taKhiyul kin fizaaoN maiN perwaaz ker raha hai? Kia jaadoo kagaati hooi ghazl hai..aanay do bhai aanay do !!!

05 June 2009 at 00:45

Khan Saeed wah wah kia bath hae farzana saheba wah.

05 June 2009 at 00:53

Erum Jahan Dear Farzana!
Bohot Ummda Mashallah…!
Baad muddat jo khushi aayi thi pal bhar ke liye
Oorrh leti hon usi lamhey ko aanchal ker ke..~

05 June 2009 at 01:55

Farhat Perveen tag nahin kia to kia hoa, raye dene se to munaa nahin kia na.
is ghazal ka to lufz lufz jese mere dil se nikla ho. yani,
“main ne yeh jana k goya yeh bhi mere dil mein hai”wali baat ho gaee na. bohat umda ghazal hai.

05 June 2009 at 02:08

Hafiza Nilofar Khan needlesss to say Farzana, you have left me spellbound again! Tum ssirf dil ki baat anokhe alfaz aur andaz mein hi nahi kehti, tum chund minton mein kitna kuch sikha jati ho . . . I am your fan and student. Hats off to you!!

05 June 2009 at 02:58

Zaynab Vaki bohat acha likhe he — is it really yours ?

05 June 2009 at 04:31

Gulnaz Kausar mein chali jaon gi yadoon ko mugafil kar kay
wah naina ji bohat khoob

05 June 2009 at 05:41

Rehman Faris Ye judai ke andheron mein damakti hui raat
Chandni chorrey gi Ik din mujhe pagal ker ke

Beautiful Versification of a feeling that is otherwise very hard to capture. Congratulationsssssss !!!! Bohot Khoob !

05 June 2009 at 05:50

Faysal Khalid bohat aalaa.

05 June 2009 at 06:53

Zaheer Ayyaz Naina Jee Really excellent i can not express in words one of ur best poetry

05 June 2009 at 07:29

Athar Khan kia kehnay farzana jee, jazbo’n ko kia hee achi aur khoobsoorat zaban dee aap ne, khush rahein

Kachi deewaron pe rakh leti hon dukh sukh ke charaagh
Aankh se oonchi Imaaraat ko oojhal ker ke

05 June 2009 at 07:37

Sultan Mandhro Thank you 4 sharing. that’s very nice poet

05 June 2009 at 08:19

Faysal Khalid ‎@ Zarshj Rana, lolz. kitna masoom sawal hai.

05 June 2009 at 08:37

Mubashir Saeed acchy ghazal hy

05 June 2009 at 10:00

Tariq Hameed Naina Ji, Bohat khoobsorat aur rawan ghazal hey, bohat achi lagi, mubarak aur dad hazir hey

05 June 2009 at 14:14

Ahmad Kamran

Naina Jee Mujhy Samina Iqbal Sahiba Sy Itfaaq Hy.

“Wo Aaya, Us Nay Daykha Or Us Nay Fatah Ker Lia”

Is Ghazal Ka Matla Bhar Pur Taur Per Aata Hy,
…Baqi Ashaar Aap Ko Mohabat Sy Daykhty Hain,
Or Maqta Aap Ko Mukamal Taskheer Ker Layta Hy.

Duain Aap K Leye.

05 June 2009 at 14:16

Ghulam Saqlain kya kahna———-naina

05 June 2009 at 14:25

Nasim Syed

شا ہ شمشا د قدا ں، خسر و ئے شیر یں دہنا ں، جیسی اس شا عرہ کی شا عر ی کے با ب میں کیا بیا ں ہو . سید ھی سید ھی با ت یہ کہ اس سے با قا عدہ جلنا شر و ع کر دینا چا ہئے کہ جب د یکھو ا یسے مو تی ر و ل لا تی ہے

یہ اپنی سو چ کے ذ خیر و ں سے کہ ہم …جیسے رشک سے ا سکا منہ تکتے رہ جا تے ہیں ..تم جس سفر پہ نکلی ہو اس میں جگہ جگہ اپنے نا م کے سنگ میل د ھر تی جا رہی ..چلو ہم بھی ان تما م نشا نا ت پر پھو ل د ھر تے

اپنی د عا ئو ں اور محبتو ں تمہا رے پیچھے پیچھے آ رہے ہیں ..کیا پیا ری شا عر ی ہے تمہا ری بہت سی لا ئیلیک کی کا سنی خو شبو اس کے نا م

05 June 2009 at 15:39

Agha Zahoor gr8

05 June 2009 at 16:29

Mati Ur Rehman wah wah wah.. Farzana Naina Sahiba!

Kiya baat hai jee… Great

05 June 2009 at 16:45

Ali Zaryoun

chandni chooray gi ek din mujhe pagal kar k..!!
chaand say tumhari aashnayi aur ramziat ka rishta tumhare bachpan say hay..is bat ka pata tumhari ktab parh kar bakhobi chal jata hay..yeh ghazal bharpoor nisayi jazbat par mushtamil hay..tum n…ay khud ko masnoi nai hone dia aur yeh tumhari buhat bari jeet hay nain.See more

05 June 2009 at 17:59

Tauqir Abbas

farzaana Nainaan sahiba,ap ki shairy k baaray men maeri raye bahut taezi say badli hay ab maeri raye ye hay

Ap aek bahut pukhta aur kohna mushq shaira hain jaded adab say aagaah hain aur jiddat say gehra rishta hay
shaer ko saada hotay hoye… bhi paechdaar hota hay jo qari ko sochnay par mujboor karta hay
aap ki ye ghazal bhi inhi baaton ka tasulsul hay

bahut achhay ashaar hain lafz bar mahal aur khyaal dil ko khainchta hay

05 June 2009 at 19:37

Farzana Khan I’m gratefull to each of you for your precious comment.

05 June 2009 at 21:46

Aftab Hassan Naina i just want to say your poetry is so delicious and powerful.

06 June 2009 at 07:47

Khawja Ammaar Samit

بھئی واہ! کیا بات ہے ۔۔ ساری غزل ہی بہت خوبصورت اور جدید غزل ہے۔
میں چلی جاؤں گی ۔۔۔۔ اس کی بخشی ہوئی
کچی دیواروں پہ ۔۔۔۔۔ آنکھ سے اونچی
یہ جدائی یے ۔۔۔۔ چاندنی چھوڑے گی
طعنہ زن وہ ہیں ۔۔۔۔ جن کو نیناں
…سارے شعر ہی بہت اچھے باکمال ہیںSee more

07 June 2009 at 00:15

Gurnam Singh Shergill aap bahut achhi ghazal likhteeN hai ab baar kaya likhooN

08 June 2009 at 22:26

Gurnam Singh Shergill orh leti huN us lamhe ko aanchal karke–vah khoob

09 June 2009 at 14:42

Meena Chopra

Kachi deewaron pe rakh leti hon dukh sukh ke charaagh
Aankh se oonchi Imaaraat ko oojhal ker ke

Oorrh leti hon usi lamhey ko aanchal ker ke

…What a powerful imgery Farzana. kasam se maza aa gaya
BAAD Muaddat ke. Dad deti hun mein aapko.
Thanks for posting.

09 June 2009 at 15:25

Majid Janjua wha wha naina ji

30 June 2009 at 01:41

Majid Janjua wha wha naina ji kia khoob likha hay,tana zan wo hain meri fiker ki benaai per,jin ko naina nay saja rakha hay kajal ker kay,,wha

30 June 2009 at 11:42

Asif Shafi Farzana Jee! Nice Ghazal. Maqata main fikr kee bainaee kay khaial achoota hai. Wonderful!!!

16 September 2009 at 04:44

Zulfiqar Ali Sunny Ab sanwaron gi bhala kaise saraapa apna
Zaat ko apni to rakh daala hai jungle ker ke

What a moving lines! Well versed…

16 September 2009 at 05:17

Zakir Hussain Ziai MAQTA KEE KYA BAAT HAI SUBHAANALLAH

22 September 2009 at 08:54

Mohammad Naeem

All the imagery employed leads to an irony exposed with metaphors and similis used in a different atmosphere.
I would love to pick three verses for the purses where these elements come out to be strong and in different tones.
Khud hi jab bhoo…l ke aati hon mein apni chat’tri
Kyon wo mil jati hai wapas mujhe jal thal ker ke
Ab sanwaron gi bhala kaise saraapa apna
Zaat ko apni to rakh daala hai jungle ker ke
Ta’ana-zan wo hain meri fikr ki beenai per
Jin ko naina ne saja rakha hai kaajal ker ke

27 September 2009 at 11:42

Mohammad Naeem

vesay to hamaray aik sahibay kashif dost k nazdeek chandni main pagal nhaeeN hua kertay, bulkeh din k wqt alul’elaan pagal hona chahiye lekin kea kejiye k hum jesay husaas log chandni main bhe pagal ho jatay haiN.
This is such a exquisitely …wonderful verse as well.

27 September 2009 at 11:47

Javed Sahil kiya khoob gazal kehi hay janab

01 March at 22:36

Comments»

1. masood ahmad - December 19, 2010

yeh judai kay andheroon mai damakti hui raat
chandni chaday gi ik din mujhey pagal karkay

hasil-i-gazal yahi ik sh’ir hai
congrats

2. sono - October 29, 2011

AOA I READ U FIRST TIME U R A GOOD POETESS ND I LIKE UR POETRY KEEP IT UP……

3. Rahila Habib - September 28, 2012

Kachi deewaron pe rakh leti hon dukh sukh ke charaagh
Aankh se oonchi Imaraat ko oojhal ker ke,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
just superb,,,Naina ,,,Blessings

4. sajjad ssk - June 7, 2015

kachi deewar hoon thokar na lagana mujh ko…..:P😀


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