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Hai Zara Sa – ہے ذرا سا

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Hai zara sa safer blue

Hai zara sa safar gawara kar

Chand lamhe faqat gawara kar

 

Aasmanon se roshni jaisa

Mujh pe Ilhaam Ik sitara kar

 

Chui Mui ki eik pat’ti hon

Dor hi se mera nazara kar

 

Dhoop mein nazm badlon par likh

Koi parchaein istea’ara kar

 

Pehle dekha tha jis mohabbat se

Ik nazar phir wohi dobara kar

 

Kho na jayein ghubaar mein naina

Mujhko ay zindagi pukara kar

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Syed Abeer Abbas Zaidi
Dhoop mein nazm badalon per likh
koi parchaiyaan isteara ker…

waaah …kia kehne !!! bohat aala !!

14 October at 01:28
Irfan Murtaza
Hai zara sa safer guzara kar
Chand lamhe faqat gawara kar

FARZANA JI…..
Matla hee haasil-e-ghazal kerkay rekh diya aap nay to…!!!!!

14 October at 01:40
Aqeel Lodhi
Wah ..Wah .. Bohat Aalaa Farzana ji … bohat Aala ….
14 October at 05:19
Masood Quazi
دھوپ میں نظم بدلوں پر لکھ: کوئ پرچھایئن استعارا کر
مدار سخن دائیرہ وجدان میں تیرنے لگے تو ایسے شعر تخلیق ھوتے ھیں
مبارکباد اور داد آفرین
14 October at 05:50
Zohaib Aftab
boht alaaa farzana ji
14 October at 07:22
Usman Ghaffar
ache ha ge
14 October at 07:30
Asim Rafique Paracha
myri chashamny smandar mein kahin dhob na jay teri hasti….
juki hi rahnay day isy na isy apny liy pukara kar
.nice poem ma’am lagta hai ap ki shagirdi karna paray gi
14 October at 07:55
Shoaib Afzaal
farzana G ap kaha hoti hay mashalah behad khobsorat ghazal hay maza a gaya par kar kalam lagati raha kejeye please….
14 October at 09:00
م۔م۔ مغل
kiaa kehny nainaa..ji..
allah tabaarak o t’aalaa tofiiqaat main izaafa farma’aay aamiin.. jiitii rahaiN.
wasslaam
14 October at 09:02
Ramzi Aasim
wah…….. both achay
14 October at 09:45
Shahzad Tarar
wonderful………….i like it
14 October at 10:14
A Q Sandeelo Qayoom
zubrdast
14 October at 10:36
Mirza Baig
kia he baat bohat zubrdast ah
14 October at 11:21
Misbah Haider
very nice
14 October at 13:21
Waqas Himayo
farzana nice yaar
14 October at 14:43
Azm Behzad
kya kehne.
“he zaraa saa safar guzaraa kar
chand lamHe faqat gavaaraa kar”

“dhuup meN nazm baadaloN par likh…

koii parchhaaiiN iste’Aarah kar ”
maashaa allah,ach’chhi Ghazal he.
allah Khush rakhe.
14 October at 16:00
Shahid Ali Rana
bohat khoob
14 October at 16:10
Rania Gull
so nice poetry
14 October at 17:37
Tayeba Ahmed
khoob!!!
14 October at 19:36 · Delete
Waqas Himayo
khoob nahe bht khooob
14 October at 19:37
Waqas Khan
Nice……..salam farzana how are u….
14 October at 22:32
Aly Ahmyd Dyrs
“Dhoop mein nazm badalon par likh;
Koi parchaein Ista’ara kar” . . . .Beautiful . .!
15 October at 00:27
Ali Zain
kia bat ha……….carry on:)
15 October at 13:24
Asim Khan
nice poetry
16 October at 08:48
Gises Shah
Muj ko aey zindagi pukara kar Bohat Khoob ji
12 November at 07:19
Talat Zahra جوہی
فرزانہ‘ بہت خوبصورت کلام ہے ہر شعر اپنے اندر ایک نیا حسن لئے ہوا ہے۔
دھوپ میں نطم بادلون پر لکھ ۔۔۔۔۔۔
کوئی پرچھائیں استعارہ کر
15 November at 22:53
Saqib Khattak Buhut Khoob . . . . . Naina Jee”Pehle dekha tha jis mohabbat se
Ik nazar phir wohi dobara kar” Subhan Allah

14 October 2009 at 06:38
  • Talib Ansari Ansari ‫غزل اچھی ہے تیسرے شعر مین میرا کی بجائے مرا لکھنا چاہیئے شاید جلدی میں آپ سے یہ سہو ہو گیا ہے‬

    19 December 2009 at 17:03
  • Zahoor Zeeoo that really nice 1. grt thought.

    29 January at 17:48 ·

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Comments»

1. fahad - September 22, 2009

bhot achhe share hai app ke i love u r poetry

2. masood - December 29, 2009

jis safar ko tu nay zarasa btadiya par , apna ta’aruf chie moie kay tour dey kar safar ko bahut doooooor kar diya

3. amirkhan - April 14, 2010

beautiful

4. Philip - October 31, 2010

The collection is very rich. I’m happy to found you & your great works !!!

5. Maneeja - February 15, 2011

Bohut khoob🙂

6. pan card verification - August 5, 2011

Bohat hi zabardast,Thanks janaab


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