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Kora – کورا

Chandni ke haaley mein kis ko khoj’ti ho tum


Chup ke yun udaasi mein kis ko sochti ho tum


Baar baar chorri ke sur kissey sunati ho


Shor se sadaa kiss ki torr torr laati ho


Bazm mein baharon ki khoi khoi lagti ho


Doston ke majmey mein kyon akeli hoti ho


Mauj mauj behti ho aanso’on mein rehti ho


Jhalaron se palkon ki toot toot jaati ho


Bulbuley ki surat mein phoot phoot jati ho


Dhund se lipat ker kyon sooni rah takti ho


Khirkiyon se barkha ko dekh kar bilakti ho


Saare sapne aankhon se eik baar behne do


Raat ki abhagun ko tara tara gehne do


Maazi, haal, mutaqbil kuch tau kora rehne do


Pull ke neeche behne do aanso’on ki ye nadiyaan


Waqt chalta jaey ga beeit jayein gi sadiyaan


Be’hison ki basti mein be’hissi ko rehne do


Dil tau poora pagal hai iss ko poora rehne do


Ye jo kehte rehta hai, Iss ko bhi wo kehne do


Tum, ye kora rehne do !!!

Sohail H Khan jawab nhi aap ki tehreer ka,buhat he be misal,dilruba aor dilnasheen,

02 June 2009 at 23:13

Rehan Qayoom Dil men ghhar kur geya vo dil ka chor
Dilnashin kitna dilruba sa tha

02 June 2009 at 23:17

Muhammad Sohail Hosla tuj ko na tha muj se juda hone ka…
warna kajal teri ankhon me na paila hotha….

02 June 2009 at 23:25

Tahir Mahmood bahut aala bahut khoob ,, laajawaab kr diya aap ne,,, itni achi poetry k bad baat karna nai bas chup chaap aankhen moondhe dair tk is k sehar men rehna chahiye aor lutf haasil karna chahiye… shukariya

03 June 2009 at 00:10

Farhat Perveen kis ko sumjha rahi hokhud ko na,kabhi reh paya hai dil kora jane do.
udasi mein bheege dheeme suron mein gungunati hoi bohat piyari nazm.dad qabool karo.

03 June 2009 at 00:43

Khan Saeed wah wah gr8 farzana g,

03 June 2009 at 01:14

Punjabi Baithak Kia kehne ji
Saare sapne aankhon se eik baar behne do
Raat ki abhagun ko tara tara gehne do
Waaaaaaaaaaaah

03 June 2009 at 01:18

Qayyum Khosa Superb .

03 June 2009 at 01:27

Shaz Khan Be’hison ki basti mein be’hissi ko rehne do
Dil tau poora pagal hai iss ko poora rehne do

beautiful Farzana, zabardast luv it dear keep it up I’ll wait 4 more
take care.

03 June 2009 at 01:33

Mohammad Naeem

Images, metaphors and similes converged into a fiber to make a perfect poem. A fine example of Pun ” kora” , ” mazee, hal, mustaqbil kuchh to kora rehnay do”, and in then in the last line, “Tum yeh kora rehnay do” really makes an everlastin…g impact on the mind.
a wonderful conjunction of art and craf.
Thanks walling it.

03 June 2009 at 02:11

Kusum Soni

kohre ke neeche gul khilein, tapash zamin ki kaafi hai
subah ki aagosh mein, fariyaad ki marzi kafi hai
Aasma wale teri fitrat ka koi kya kahe
sacch hai kya aur jhooth hai kya, dhundhla fasana kya kahe
dhundh mein bhi ik dhuan,aur aag mei…n bhi ik duan
kora kagaz yeh zamin, kadmon ki aahat kafi hai

03 June 2009 at 03:00

Rehman Faris Bohot Umda !!!

03 June 2009 at 04:30

Abdul Hameed Shahid bohat umda,

03 June 2009 at 06:34

Khuram S Zia Gud its perfect classy 1

03 June 2009 at 07:17

Mirza Zaheer Ahmed Farzana G U r Awsome

03 June 2009 at 07:33

Emdad Rahman magical:)

03 June 2009 at 07:40

Abdul Quddus Chudhary kis trah se lafzon ke moti tum piroti ho
kore dil pe koi tum aanch ab na aane do

yeh dil mange more! please

03 June 2009 at 08:06

Razza Khan Waqt chalta jaey ga beeit jayein gi sadiyaan
Be’hison ki basti mein be’hissi ko rehne do

behout ummada khiyal hy .. Wah ” be’hissi ko rehne do”
khobsourat

03 June 2009 at 08:56

Zaheer Ayyaz exclusive

03 June 2009 at 09:24

Ahmad Kamran Jhalroon Sy Palkon Ki, Toot Toot Jati Ho.

Khob Hy Jee.

03 June 2009 at 10:45

Faraz Arjumand wao bohat umda hey yea

03 June 2009 at 10:50

Amjad Rafique very nice …

03 June 2009 at 16:34

Tauqir Abbas

bahut bajeeb baat hay main kaye baar pehlay bhi is nazm ko parh chuka hon laekin her baar aek naye aahung k sath saamnay aa jati hay mujhay ye nazm kabhi kisi birhin ka naghma lagta hay aur kabhi kisi karmon jali k dukhh ka dhowaan dikhhaye… daenay lagta hay

main is nazm ko hijr ka nauha kahoon tu bay ja na hoga bahut shandaar craft aur jaandaar lehja hay
nazm ka asl kamaal hi yehi hota hay k nazm say maani nahi bul keh maani ka khaka ubhharta hay aur fun ibaadut bun jata hay

03 June 2009 at 18:43

Jamshaid Ahmed Jokhio bohat ache Nazam hy, aik umeed hy, aik aasra hy, ky rat ke guph andeera khatam hony ko hy.
Zabrdast

04 June 2009 at 07:13

Ra’ana- Dilruba- Yasmin

‎”Dil tau poora pagal hai iss ko poora rehne do
Ye jo kehte rehta hai, Iss ko bhi wo kehne do
Tum, ye kora rehne do “..Tugs at my heart strings!
So, lyrical with imageries, metaphors that float with ease
down the stream of my mind’s eyes..
…Naina, your creation is
Enchanting, indeed **=.)
..
Love..
**^*^.

05 June 2009 at 02:41

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1. ASH - June 12, 2012

JUDAIYAN HO JAIN HASEEN’
AGAR HO ISSKA YAQEEN’
WOH HUMAIN BHOOLA NHEEN’

~~~~~~ @$H!F@ k! N@Z@M@!N~~~~~~~~


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