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Hawa Ki Seetiyaan – ہوا کی سیٹیاں

Gai shaamon ki ronaq zard pat’ton ki tarah urr ker
Sehan mein shor kerti hai
Shafaq khanabadoshon ki tarah dar dar bhatakti hai
Diye ki lou bharakti
Bicharny waley jab saare kabooter laut aate hain
Tau mein us chaand ki thaali mein apne khwab rakhti hon
Teri basti mein jaati hon
Jahan aawaaz par teri meri aawaaz raqsaan thi
Magar us lamhe jaane kyon
Hawaein sur badalti hain
Kahani cheen ker mujh se
Mere dil ko masalti hain
Kateeley zakhm deti hain
Mein inn dhundli fazao’un mein
Thitharti sard shaamon mein
Zamastani hawa ke barf our’rhey marghzaaron mein
Sada’ein chorr kar chup chaap ghar ko laut aati hon
Dareechey bund kerti hon
Sama’at bund karti hon
Magar kambakht, jaane kaun se rastey se aati hain
Barri be’sur hawa’on ki
Fasurdah seetiyaan saari
Hawaa ki seetiyaan saari !!!

Jhon Jenson, Muhammad Nauman Azam, Mehboob Alam Khan and 14 others like this.
Ahsan Bhatti
hmmmmmm, Nice g
02 October at 21:16
Zaib Khan
this is a grat creation ……….. Alafaz ki khbsourt ko bayan karny k liye bhi Haraf chye hoty hain…….. jo k mery paas nahi hain………… khubsurat alfaz to ies azad namzm mai istaml kiye ja chuky hain………bs itna he Mashallah
02 October at 21:20
Tanvir Abbas
zaberdast
02 October at 21:26
Saddique Ali
nice…
02 October at 21:27
Rohail Riaz
hmmm great topic but u feel it when ya r in love….when ya thinking about someone…..when ya feeling that sumone is holding ur hand and walking with ya for reaching the place where nobody is there only ya and her…….nobody is available to disturb ya, nobdy is stop ya to talking long with her……….waiting to hear that in that sort of cndition
02 October at 21:35
Khan Baluch
kia bat hai “achi nazam hay”
02 October at 21:48
Aazad Khan
fantastic
02 October at 21:57
Javed Abro
nice
02 October at 22:00
Sarwat Rabbani
Beautiful..
02 October at 22:10
DrBukhari LoveHumanity
plz dunt count my comment cuz..as u said this poem is dedicated to all those who are NOT using the comments option🙂
02 October at 22:14
Amar Suhail
nice
02 October at 22:19
Imtiaz Gouhar
Wahh… very nice
02 October at 22:27
MahMood Malik
F@RZANA K N@m===Magar kambakht, jaane kaun se rastey se aati hain
Barri be’sur hawa’on ki
Fasurdah seetiyaan saari
Hawaa ki seetiyaan saari
Mere dil ko masalti hain… Read more
Kateeley zakhm deti hain
Mein inn dhundli fazao’un mein
Thitharti sard shaamon mein
Tujay jab ma Y@@D kERTA HOUN
02 October at 22:27
Faiz Alam Babar
bohut hi dilkash o dil pazeer nazmoon main sey aik shaahkaar nazm dili daad o mubarakbaad qabool keejiye
02 October at 23:16
Majeed Akhtar
Bohot dilkash nazm hay Naina…… Hum ne us wqt dekha jab Naeem ne baqaida hamaiN DaNTa. Thank u Naeem.
02 October at 23:51
Imran Najeeb
nice
03 October at 05:46
م۔م۔ مغل
nainaaN .. kiaa kehny waah.. maashaa allah buhat khoob
( aik baat k;e Husan nahiiN husn hay dard kay wazn par , isy daikh liijay ga) allah kary zor-e-qalam or ziadaa..
03 October at 05:52
Faisal Mahmood
Good
03 October at 06:23
Ch Kamran Ali
wha JanaB…
03 October at 06:40
اعجاز عبید
نیناں، میں بھی کومنٹ دیتا نہیں، کہ تم تصویروں میں اور رومن میں دیتی ہو شاعری۔ رومن کے کومنٹس بھی نہیں پڑھ سکتا۔
بہر حال نظم کا حسن “صحن” کا تلفظ خراب کر رہا ہے۔ درست ح ساکت ہے۔
03 October at 06:44
م۔م۔ مغل
thnx baba jaani..
03 October at 06:51
Shoaib Afzaal
نیناں جی آپ کی نظمیں لیڈ پنسل سے بنی کہرباوں کی تصویروں کی مانند ہوتی ھیں۔۔۔۔بے حد خوبصورت
03 October at 07:08
Zahid Naeem
Excellent, totally impressed
03 October at 09:42
Javed Aslam
bohat ashi nazam ha lakan samajh nahi ai
03 October at 10:04
Kishwar Noreen
good
03 October at 10:27
Shahid Iqbal
zabardast…..
03 October at 11:05
Tayeba Ahmed
very touching………..
03 October at 11:41
Zakir Hussain Ziai
بہت خوب نہاييت جزباتی اور خوبصورت نظم
03 October at 15:24
Rania Gull
SO NICE POEM MISS SAMINA
03 October at 16:07
Rania Gull
AeY Allah! Jab bhi tera asmaan daikhta hun Us mein basa ik jahaan daikhta hun Na jaane kitne hi jahaanon ki sair karta hun Khol kar jab tera QURAN daikhta hun Tere ehsaan kitne hain bandon pe Jab bhi SURAH REHMAN daikhta hun Tu tu kehta hai Rag-e-jaan se bhi hun MAIN qareeb Phir pareshan kyun aaj ka insaan daikhta hun Us ki REHMAT se kabhi mayoos na hona logo Tum pe mein uski REHMAT k nishan daikhta hun!
03 October at 16:24
Honey Khan
waooooooo farzana waooooooo
03 October at 17:14
Sheliza O’Neil
واہ ، زبردست … بہت عمدہ ،،
میں آپکی اجازت کے بغیر ہی اپنی ڈائری میں نوٹ کررہی ہوں سہیلی،
03 October at 17:17
Gulnaz Kausar
بیتے ہوئے وقت کا ماتم جو ماتم لگتا بھی نہیں ۔۔۔ بچھڑے ہوؤں کا دکھ ۔۔۔ ماضی پر ایک ذرا سی نگاہ اور بے پناہ خوف ۔۔۔ نیناں ڈرتی ہے ۔۔۔ بھلا کس سے ۔۔۔۔
04 October at 03:12
Mehboob Alam Khan
extremely wonderfull
04 October at 09:33
Zohaib Aftab
its really good
06 October at 16:11
DrBukhari LoveHumanity
Hawa ki shikayat kiyon?
Hawa aashufta-tar rakhti hay hum aashufta-haaloon ko… baratna chahti hay dasht, majnooo kay hawaaloon ko🙂
06 October at 22:06

Comments»

1. ALI - July 7, 2008

ap ki web sit: dekh kar acha laga , dil ko choo leny waly mazameen hain

mujhai parhny ka bhut kam shook hai , magar main ny ap ki web: c kafy parha hai

Sikander Ali
Dubai( UAE)
+971507164014

2. Naina - July 7, 2008

Hi Ali,

Good to know that you read some extra because of Me….keep It up mate🙂

3. sana ur rahman - June 26, 2011

maine bahut kam nasr padhi hai lekin apki nazm mujhko achi lagi.


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