superb … ala … kamal kiaya hai … if i m wrong u give a new touch to ghazal … mubarak hoo … keep it up carry on … i m poet too … but i m realy impresd by ur style ))
Naina i read your poetry book. Ap boht pyara likhti hain. ksi k pass achi poetry ho tu please mery in numbers pr send krain. 03145438038, 03445438038. Sajid Mehmood Chaudhry From Azad Kashmir.
yay haseen shaam apni
abhi jiss meiN ghul rahi hai
teray parahan kee khushboo
abhi jiss meiN khil rahay heiN
meray khawab kay shagoofay
zera dair ka hai manzar
zera dair meiN ufq par
khilay ga koi sitaara
teri simt daik kar woh
karay ga koi ishara
teray dil ko aayay ga phir
kissi yaad ka bullawa
koi qissa-ay judaaee, koi kaar-ay naamukamal
koi khawab-ay naa shagufta, koi baat kehnay wali
salam naina g,main ne apki book to nai parhi par apki poetry ko aik song main parha hai by GOD maza aa gya,apki soch main romaniat k sath fikr bi hai,keep it up,,bbye
wow ! mahshAllah bahot nice
aur design bhi mahshAllah bahot acha hai
look like main is ko churane wala hoon
Thanks Bilal, I’ve been to your page It’s also good, happy to seethis “Chori”.
hi
salam naina gi kya bat ha ap ne to kamal kardeya Allah ap ko aur kamyabi dea ameen mery dua hamesha ap ke sathe rahee gi
superb … ala … kamal kiaya hai … if i m wrong u give a new touch to ghazal … mubarak hoo … keep it up carry on … i m poet too … but i m realy impresd by ur style
))
Thanks a lot.
Good job. Song and poetry is the greatest work ” kadi aa mil sanwal yaar ve” i dunno this song is full with the mystery attraction
very very nice poetry.
Naina i read your poetry book. Ap boht pyara likhti hain. ksi k pass achi poetry ho tu please mery in numbers pr send krain. 03145438038, 03445438038. Sajid Mehmood Chaudhry From Azad Kashmir.
yay haseen shaam apni
abhi jiss meiN ghul rahi hai
teray parahan kee khushboo
abhi jiss meiN khil rahay heiN
meray khawab kay shagoofay
zera dair ka hai manzar
zera dair meiN ufq par
khilay ga koi sitaara
teri simt daik kar woh
karay ga koi ishara
teray dil ko aayay ga phir
kissi yaad ka bullawa
koi qissa-ay judaaee, koi kaar-ay naamukamal
koi khawab-ay naa shagufta, koi baat kehnay wali
humeiN chaahiyay tha milna
kissi ahad-ay mehrbaaN meiN
kissi khawab kay yaqeeN meiN
kissi aur aasmaaN par
kissi aur sarzameeN meiN
humeiN chahiyay tha milna…
Thanks
hallo
salam naina g,main ne apki book to nai parhi par apki poetry ko aik song main parha hai by GOD maza aa gya,apki soch main romaniat k sath fikr bi hai,keep it up,,bbye
very nice.I like this very much.I am thankfull to urdupal and all team for providing such a good web,which has every thing in it.
nice poetry